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Patience by ~rockgod80s:iconrockgod80s:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Family Life > Open


Waiting,
For something.
Ain't nothing living.
Yeah,nobody here.
is evreyone dead?
could they have cut off all thier heads?
Just wait on,
wait on.
Wait for something,
Waiting for nothing,
in this endless abyss.
Wait for days,
Wait for years.
Just let me have my time.
Just let me take my time.
Remberance is only what's left now.
Biting on my patience.
Biting on me.
When evreyone's gone,
will i still stand here?
Where the end marks insanity.
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~vampirecraver101 Jul 9, 2009, 8:56:04 AM
that is prfect!!!!!! it makes me want to read it over and over again!

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95% of teens would cry if they saw the Jonas Brothers at the top of a skyscraper about to jump. Copy and paste this your Sig if you are in the 5% that would shout
'Jump assholes (^____^)
_ _ _ _ _
death is easy. life is the hard part.
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~rockgod80s Jul 9, 2009, 8:58:33 AM
wow...i guess i came back to the poetry ways with a big bang.

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I love ~houseofnightfan with all my heart & i always will.
Even though our phycical seperation of land has broken us,becuase niether of us can be there,because all i wanted was true love.
:(
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~vampirecraver101 Jul 9, 2009, 9:03:34 AM
ofcorse you did! I used to write poem to. Then one day it hit the perfect poem! I'll post it in just a sec.

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95% of teens would cry if they saw the Jonas Brothers at the top of a skyscraper about to jump. Copy and paste this your Sig if you are in the 5% that would shout
'Jump assholes (^____^)
_ _ _ _ _
death is easy. life is the hard part.
:iconrockgod80s:
~rockgod80s Jul 9, 2009, 9:05:35 AM
Yep,there's really nothing like making something perfect. it usually comes out of much time and thought.

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I love ~houseofnightfan with all my heart & i always will.
Even though our phycical seperation of land has broken us,becuase niether of us can be there,because all i wanted was true love.
:(
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Mood: Wow! ~vampirecraver101 Jul 9, 2009, 9:17:11 AM
i didn't even have to think. i was mad about something (i dont remember what it was)and it just pieced its self together, right then&there.it was like ding up pops a light bulb!

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95% of teens would cry if they saw the Jonas Brothers at the top of a skyscraper about to jump. Copy and paste this your Sig if you are in the 5% that would shout
'Jump assholes (^____^)
_ _ _ _ _
death is easy. life is the hard part.
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~houseofnightfan Jul 9, 2009, 9:18:02 AM
this is some of your best work! :D well done you!

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being heartbroken truely sucks D: espically when you still love the guy.

:( i still and always will love ~rockgod80s
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~rockgod80s Jul 9, 2009, 9:18:52 AM
It's amazing how something can go so far. and make people sh*t bricks.

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I love ~houseofnightfan with all my heart & i always will.
Even though our phycical seperation of land has broken us,becuase niether of us can be there,because all i wanted was true love.
:(
:iconrockgod80s:
~rockgod80s Jul 9, 2009, 9:21:13 AM
thanks! I wasn't sure this one was going to be this good! :hug:

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I love ~houseofnightfan with all my heart & i always will.
Even though our phycical seperation of land has broken us,becuase niether of us can be there,because all i wanted was true love.
:(
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~houseofnightfan Jul 9, 2009, 9:24:21 AM
all your work is good, Jared. don't doubt it you know how much that pisses me off. your good learn to admitt it!

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being heartbroken truely sucks D: espically when you still love the guy.

:( i still and always will love ~rockgod80s
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